tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5690887006555810946.post2887110591863843739..comments2024-02-10T12:25:39.534+04:00Comments on An Englishman Abroad: 2 Mongolia Awaits!Ianhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05167458171459084910noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5690887006555810946.post-85536549172419527262009-05-02T07:39:00.000+04:002009-05-02T07:39:00.000+04:00Ian, have screwed up my wrist and can barely type....Ian, have screwed up my wrist and can barely type. couple of things. the shift to the POV of the flight attendant is a little jarring since otherwise you are sticking pretty much with tom. also, the end of the chapter, "and, of course, if only he had been able to foresee the terrible outcome of that night, he, surely, would never have left the safety of his home, so far away now, on the other side of the world" is kinda cliched. I will have to go back & see why he needed a russian visa...<br /><br />otherwise great little details, yurt suburbs, little pools of melting snow and mud...Other Lisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08079055348844157557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5690887006555810946.post-75373560567182165202009-03-17T18:30:00.000+04:002009-03-17T18:30:00.000+04:00this is a really interesting story! I'll keep you ...this is a really interesting story! I'll keep you posted on the Vision Board:)Patti Edmon Artisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00471255562289824047noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5690887006555810946.post-50782660527702538682009-02-21T20:40:00.000+04:002009-02-21T20:40:00.000+04:00Interesting. If you keep it going, I'll keep comi...Interesting. If you keep it going, I'll keep coming back.-erhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13432512057295790659noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5690887006555810946.post-86295151723924907112009-02-20T07:41:00.000+04:002009-02-20T07:41:00.000+04:00nice imagery...nice imagery...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com