tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5690887006555810946.post8826280477279806357..comments2024-02-10T12:25:39.534+04:00Comments on An Englishman Abroad: 1 The Mongolian GirlIanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05167458171459084910noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5690887006555810946.post-33828934595732781602009-04-24T11:12:00.000+04:002009-04-24T11:12:00.000+04:00Yes, I saw it and I've rewritten that part now. I ...Yes, I saw it and I've rewritten that part now. I always welcome editorial advice. Thanks, Lisa.Ianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05167458171459084910noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5690887006555810946.post-280432125291186352009-04-24T10:54:00.000+04:002009-04-24T10:54:00.000+04:00I love the details here: the bullfinch, the Chingi...I love the details here: the bullfinch, the Chingis Khan Vodka. I feel like I'm really there (I travel a fair amount myself and if you haven't spent some time in Mongolia, you do an uncannily fabulous job convincing me that you have).<br /><br />I'd look for things like, "Little did he realise what a significant role Chinggis Khan vodka was about to play in his life." It's sort of cliched, especially compared to all the other great, precise detail. I skimmed a couple other more recently posted chapters and saw some stuff like this as well. <br /><br />Who knows if you'll see this comment so far back in the blog, but I'm definitely interested in reading more.Other Lisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08079055348844157557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5690887006555810946.post-58814128113208026782009-03-18T03:39:00.000+04:002009-03-18T03:39:00.000+04:00Found via webfictionguide. Interesting start; I wa...Found via webfictionguide. Interesting start; I was in Russia, Mongolia & China last September! Will read more :)Rachel Cotterillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08969719330048416996noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5690887006555810946.post-13149006874976513782009-02-19T01:12:00.000+04:002009-02-19T01:12:00.000+04:00is this the beginning of a novel? it's a novel id...is this the beginning of a novel? it's a novel idea, you know, do a novel on a blog - love it!<BR/>and thanks for your comment<BR/>(i'm the seaside girl)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com